"A reader is not supposed to be aware that someone's written the story. He's supposed to be completely immersed, submerged in the environment"
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The best prose, Jack Vance argues, is a kind of disappearing act: the author builds a world so persuasive the reader forgets there is a builder. It is a credo of immersion, but also a quiet flex. To make your presence vanish on the page takes control so absolute it looks like effortlessness. Vance isn’t praising bland “invisibility”; he’s describing craftsmanship that hides its seams.
The intent is pragmatic, almost architectural. Story isn’t a lecture delivered at the reader; it’s an environment the reader inhabits. That word choice matters. “Immersed, submerged” suggests pressure and density, not casual entertainment. A Vancean world works when it surrounds you with texture - social rules, strange idioms, moral economies - until you start navigating by its internal logic. The subtext is a warning against authorial vanity: the wink to the audience, the self-conscious cleverness, the explanatory aside that reminds you someone is arranging the furniture. Those moves may earn admiration, but they puncture the spell.
Contextually, Vance is a twentieth-century fantasist and science fiction stylist who treated language as worldbuilding technology. His line lands as a rebuttal to both pulp clumsiness (where the scaffolding shows) and more modern metafictional habits that insist on pointing at their own artifice. He’s not denying that stories are made; he’s insisting that, while you’re inside one, the making should feel like weather - present everywhere, noticed nowhere.
The intent is pragmatic, almost architectural. Story isn’t a lecture delivered at the reader; it’s an environment the reader inhabits. That word choice matters. “Immersed, submerged” suggests pressure and density, not casual entertainment. A Vancean world works when it surrounds you with texture - social rules, strange idioms, moral economies - until you start navigating by its internal logic. The subtext is a warning against authorial vanity: the wink to the audience, the self-conscious cleverness, the explanatory aside that reminds you someone is arranging the furniture. Those moves may earn admiration, but they puncture the spell.
Contextually, Vance is a twentieth-century fantasist and science fiction stylist who treated language as worldbuilding technology. His line lands as a rebuttal to both pulp clumsiness (where the scaffolding shows) and more modern metafictional habits that insist on pointing at their own artifice. He’s not denying that stories are made; he’s insisting that, while you’re inside one, the making should feel like weather - present everywhere, noticed nowhere.
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