"A rhyme doesn't make a song"
About this Quote
In six blunt words, Dorothy Fields draws a bright line between ornament and architecture. “A rhyme doesn’t make a song” is the kind of warning you can imagine delivered across a piano bench in rehearsal: stop chasing the easy click of matching sounds and start building something that moves. Fields came up in Tin Pan Alley and Broadway, places where rhyme was currency and cleverness could pass for craft if you weren’t careful. She’s calling that bluff.
The intent is practical, almost managerial: lyricists can’t hide behind a neat couplet when the emotional engine is missing. Rhyme is a tool, not the payoff. The subtext is sharper: audiences may applaud wit in the moment, but what they remember is feeling, momentum, and specificity. A lyric that rhymes without purpose is just wordplay wearing stage clothes.
Fields also sneaks in a defense of collaboration. A “song” is not a poem on a page; it’s melody, timing, breath, and performance. Rhyme can even be the enemy if it forces a line into a predictable shape, flattening the character or sanding off truth so the syllables can line up. Her point lands because it’s anti-romantic about inspiration and pro-professional about outcome: craft isn’t the glittering surface, it’s the structure underneath that lets the surface shine.
In an era when novelty numbers and punchline lyrics could crowd the market, Fields is insisting on standards. The rhyme is the handshake; the song is the relationship.
The intent is practical, almost managerial: lyricists can’t hide behind a neat couplet when the emotional engine is missing. Rhyme is a tool, not the payoff. The subtext is sharper: audiences may applaud wit in the moment, but what they remember is feeling, momentum, and specificity. A lyric that rhymes without purpose is just wordplay wearing stage clothes.
Fields also sneaks in a defense of collaboration. A “song” is not a poem on a page; it’s melody, timing, breath, and performance. Rhyme can even be the enemy if it forces a line into a predictable shape, flattening the character or sanding off truth so the syllables can line up. Her point lands because it’s anti-romantic about inspiration and pro-professional about outcome: craft isn’t the glittering surface, it’s the structure underneath that lets the surface shine.
In an era when novelty numbers and punchline lyrics could crowd the market, Fields is insisting on standards. The rhyme is the handshake; the song is the relationship.
Quote Details
| Topic | Music |
|---|---|
| Source | Help us find the source |
More Quotes by Dorothy
Add to List





