"A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts"
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The subtext is quietly disciplinary. Calling a word “unnecessary” implies a standard beyond the writer’s self-expression: the reader’s time, the argument’s clarity, the sentence’s job. This is the Protestant work ethic of composition, a suspicion of indulgence and a faith that meaning emerges when clutter is cut away. There’s also a swipe at a certain kind of intellectual fog: verbosity as status performance, the way inflated language can masquerade as sophistication.
Context matters: Strunk writes from an early-20th-century American moment enthralled by efficiency, industrial systems, and streamlined design. The line anticipates modernist taste - clean, spare, anti-Victorian - and the institutional pressures of schooling, where rules promise order. It’s prescriptive, even severe, but effective because it turns revision into a tangible task: remove parts until what remains can’t be spared without breaking the thing.
Quote Details
| Topic | Writing |
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| Source | William Strunk Jr., The Elements of Style (1918). Original pamphlet contains Strunk's rule urging omission of unnecessary words, sentences, lines, and parts (Elementary Principles of Composition). |
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Jr., William Strunk,. (2026, January 16). A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/a-sentence-should-contain-no-unnecessary-words-a-96712/
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Jr., William Strunk,. "A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts." FixQuotes. January 16, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/a-sentence-should-contain-no-unnecessary-words-a-96712/.
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"A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts." FixQuotes, 16 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/a-sentence-should-contain-no-unnecessary-words-a-96712/. Accessed 22 Feb. 2026.





