"All the revision in the world will not save a bad first draft: for the architecture of the thing comes, or fails to come, in the first conception, and revision only affects the detail and ornament, alas!"
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The intent is partly disciplinary. Lawrence is trying to protect the writer from a comforting lie: that time and technique can substitute for clarity of vision. He’s not dismissing revision; he’s demoting it. Detail and ornament matter, but only after the load-bearing choices have been made - what the piece is, what it wants, what it’s built to hold. The subtext is moral as much as aesthetic: the first draft is where you commit to an idea, not where you merely “get words down.”
Context sharpens it. As an archaeologist (and, historically, a man steeped in military planning and logistical reality), Lawrence thinks in plans, foundations, and failure modes. Ruins teach a brutal lesson: you can reconstruct a façade, but you can’t fake a missing design. In a culture that fetishizes endless revision and productivity hacks, Lawrence offers an older, harsher romance: the real drama is conception. Everything after is carpentry.
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Lawrence, T. E. (2026, January 16). All the revision in the world will not save a bad first draft: for the architecture of the thing comes, or fails to come, in the first conception, and revision only affects the detail and ornament, alas! FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/all-the-revision-in-the-world-will-not-save-a-bad-99220/
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Lawrence, T. E. "All the revision in the world will not save a bad first draft: for the architecture of the thing comes, or fails to come, in the first conception, and revision only affects the detail and ornament, alas!" FixQuotes. January 16, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/all-the-revision-in-the-world-will-not-save-a-bad-99220/.
MLA Style (9th ed.)
"All the revision in the world will not save a bad first draft: for the architecture of the thing comes, or fails to come, in the first conception, and revision only affects the detail and ornament, alas!" FixQuotes, 16 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/all-the-revision-in-the-world-will-not-save-a-bad-99220/. Accessed 13 Feb. 2026.





