"Cliches and adjectives permeated my prose"
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The verb "permeated" does sly work. It isn't "appeared" or "snuck in". It's saturation, a kind of contamination. Schaap implies the problem isn't a few lazy phrases; it's an atmosphere in the writing, the way habitual language can replace actual seeing. Cliches are social shorthand, the pre-fabricated feelings a reader recognizes instantly. Adjectives are their accomplices: quick emotional cues that let a sentence pretend it has observed something when it has only judged it.
Coming from Schaap, a celebrated chronicler of athletes and spectacle, the line also carries insider context. Sports journalism is built to tempt cliche because the events arrive already myth-shaped: heroes, heartbreak, redemption arcs, "must-win" moments. Adjectives become the sugar that helps the myth go down. By admitting to both vices at once, Schaap isn't just apologizing; he's puncturing the genre's incentives.
The subtext is almost ethical: if your prose is "permeated" by ready-made language, your thinking probably is too. It's a reminder that style isn't decoration in journalism. It's epistemology. The words you reach for determine whether you're documenting reality or recycling a story you've heard a hundred times.
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"Cliches and adjectives permeated my prose." FixQuotes, 17 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/cliches-and-adjectives-permeated-my-prose-52874/. Accessed 12 Feb. 2026.


