"Deep feeling doesn't make for good poetry. A way with language would be a bit of help"
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Gunn’s phrasing is doing quiet work. “Doesn’t make for” is coolly domestic, like he’s talking about a recipe that fails if you over-rely on one ingredient. Then the understatement in “would be a bit of help” is the knife: of course language is the whole job, but Gunn plays it as a modest suggestion, letting the audience feel the correction rather than be lectured. It’s wit as pedagogy.
The subtext is also a defense of form against confession. Gunn came up through a mid-century moment when poets were fighting over whether raw personal intensity could carry a poem on its own. His own work, shaped by formal discipline but willing to meet modern subjects head-on, sits between camps: emotion matters, but it must be translated, not merely displayed. The quote is a reminder that art isn’t a diary with line breaks; it’s a made thing, engineered for impact. Feeling is the spark. Language is the circuitry that turns it into light.
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| Topic | Poetry |
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Gunn, Thom. (2026, January 18). Deep feeling doesn't make for good poetry. A way with language would be a bit of help. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/deep-feeling-doesnt-make-for-good-poetry-a-way-8520/
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"Deep feeling doesn't make for good poetry. A way with language would be a bit of help." FixQuotes, 18 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/deep-feeling-doesnt-make-for-good-poetry-a-way-8520/. Accessed 12 Feb. 2026.







