"Few men could explain why they enlisted, and if they attempted they might only prove that they had done as a politician said the electorate does, the right thing from the wrong motive"
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MacGill turns the patriotic origin story inside out: enlistment, that most mythologized act of public virtue, is treated as something men can barely account for without embarrassing themselves. The line lands with a journalist's ear for the dodges people use when asked to justify their own choices. "Few men could explain" isn’t just about inarticulateness; it’s about how war scrambles the neat narratives a society wants. If they tried to explain, they’d "only prove" something nastier: that even the supposedly noble can be a kind of accident.
The pivot is the politician’s cliché about voters doing "the right thing from the wrong motive". MacGill borrows that sneer and aims it at recruitment rhetoric. It’s a shrewd move. He doesn’t deny that enlistment can be "the right thing"; he questions the moral clean-room fantasy around why it happens. Men sign up for wages, escape, peer pressure, adventure, status, shame, boredom, fear of being thought a coward. In that list is the subtext: the state depends on mixed motives, then launders them into a single story called duty.
Context matters: MacGill wrote out of a world where working-class men were aggressively courted and coerced into uniform, then expected to wrap their private messiness in public nobility. The sentence is compact cynicism with a humane edge: it refuses to romanticize the enlisted man, but it also refuses to let leaders pretend they recruited saints.
The pivot is the politician’s cliché about voters doing "the right thing from the wrong motive". MacGill borrows that sneer and aims it at recruitment rhetoric. It’s a shrewd move. He doesn’t deny that enlistment can be "the right thing"; he questions the moral clean-room fantasy around why it happens. Men sign up for wages, escape, peer pressure, adventure, status, shame, boredom, fear of being thought a coward. In that list is the subtext: the state depends on mixed motives, then launders them into a single story called duty.
Context matters: MacGill wrote out of a world where working-class men were aggressively courted and coerced into uniform, then expected to wrap their private messiness in public nobility. The sentence is compact cynicism with a humane edge: it refuses to romanticize the enlisted man, but it also refuses to let leaders pretend they recruited saints.
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| Topic | War |
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