"I cannot be much pleased without an appearance of truth; at least of possibility; I wish the history to be natural though the sentiments are refined; and the characters to be probable, though their behaviour is excelling"
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The balancing act she sketches is basically the 18th-century novel learning its power. “History” here means narrative - plot as lived experience - which must be “natural,” while “sentiments” can be “refined.” In other words: elevate the emotional and moral texture, but don’t float the story off the ground. Burney is making room for heightened feeling (a hallmark of her era’s sensibility) without excusing melodrama. She’ll allow artifice in the heart, not in the bones.
Her last clause is the real flex: characters should be “probable,” even if their behavior is “excelling.” That’s a defense of exceptional people written as recognizably human, not as cardboard heroes. The subtext is aesthetic and ethical at once: fiction should improve us by presenting models of virtue, wit, or resilience, but it can’t preach from a universe that doesn’t resemble our own. Burney is protecting the novel from both gossip-level triviality and fairy-tale convenience, insisting it earn its intensity.
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Burney, Frances. (2026, February 16). I cannot be much pleased without an appearance of truth; at least of possibility; I wish the history to be natural though the sentiments are refined; and the characters to be probable, though their behaviour is excelling. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/i-cannot-be-much-pleased-without-an-appearance-of-132049/
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Burney, Frances. "I cannot be much pleased without an appearance of truth; at least of possibility; I wish the history to be natural though the sentiments are refined; and the characters to be probable, though their behaviour is excelling." FixQuotes. February 16, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/i-cannot-be-much-pleased-without-an-appearance-of-132049/.
MLA Style (9th ed.)
"I cannot be much pleased without an appearance of truth; at least of possibility; I wish the history to be natural though the sentiments are refined; and the characters to be probable, though their behaviour is excelling." FixQuotes, 16 Feb. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/i-cannot-be-much-pleased-without-an-appearance-of-132049/. Accessed 16 Feb. 2026.







