"I demand that my books be judged with utmost severity, by knowledgeable people who know the rules of grammar and of logic, and who will seek beneath the footsteps of my commas the lice of my thought in the head of my style"
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The sly brilliance is in the grotesque zoom lens: "beneath the footsteps of my commas" and the "lice of my thought in the head of my style". Commas become footprints, evidence at a crime scene. Thought becomes something parasitic, irritating, unglamorous. Style gets a "head", as if it’s a living body that can be inspected for infestation. It’s an anti-Romantic metaphor that refuses the comforting myth of the poet as pure inspiration. He frames creation as a hygiene problem: if you really want to know what I’m made of, check the scalp, not the perfume.
Context sharpens the edge. Aragon emerged from Surrealism (which loved breaking rules) and later tied himself to Communist cultural politics (which loved enforcing them). This demand plays both sides: he invokes rules, then invites you to find the unruly creature underneath. The subtext is a challenge to critics and readers alike: don’t worship the poem, audit it; don’t settle for surface music, test the machinery. If the poem fails, let it fail in court. If it lives, it earns its passport.
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Aragon, Louis. (2026, January 16). I demand that my books be judged with utmost severity, by knowledgeable people who know the rules of grammar and of logic, and who will seek beneath the footsteps of my commas the lice of my thought in the head of my style. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/i-demand-that-my-books-be-judged-with-utmost-118594/
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Aragon, Louis. "I demand that my books be judged with utmost severity, by knowledgeable people who know the rules of grammar and of logic, and who will seek beneath the footsteps of my commas the lice of my thought in the head of my style." FixQuotes. January 16, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/i-demand-that-my-books-be-judged-with-utmost-118594/.
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"I demand that my books be judged with utmost severity, by knowledgeable people who know the rules of grammar and of logic, and who will seek beneath the footsteps of my commas the lice of my thought in the head of my style." FixQuotes, 16 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/i-demand-that-my-books-be-judged-with-utmost-118594/. Accessed 12 Feb. 2026.









