"I tell students they will know they are getting somewhere when a scene is so painful they can just barely bring themselves to write about it. A writer has to draw blood"
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Pain isn’t a side effect here; it’s the proof of contact. Robert Morgan’s line frames writing as a kind of controlled injury, a deliberate reopening of whatever the mind would rather cauterize. The advice is brutal because it’s diagnostic: if a scene feels merely “sad” or “dramatic,” it may still be safely performative. But if you can “just barely bring” yourself to write it, you’re probably near the live wire where truth, shame, grief, or guilt hasn’t been converted into a tidy story yet.
Morgan’s soldierly context matters. Military culture prizes composure, mission focus, and the suppression of panic. Trauma gets managed through procedure and silence; emotions are liabilities until they’re not. “Draw blood” borrows the logic of combat and field medicine: you don’t heal what you refuse to expose, and you don’t know what’s real until there’s consequence. The metaphor also suggests discipline, not indulgence. Blood is not melodrama; it’s evidence.
Subtextually, he’s warning against two fashionable evasions: aesthetic distance (beautiful sentences that never risk anything) and moral self-protection (writing that edits out one’s own complicity). The “painful scene” isn’t necessarily violence; it can be the moment you look cowardice, desire, prejudice, or love-with-conditions in the eye.
Still, the line carries a quiet ethical demand. Drawing blood is acceptable only if the wound is yours first. Otherwise the bravado slips into exploitation: mining other people’s suffering for literary adrenaline. Morgan’s challenge is to risk yourself on the page, not to weaponize pain as content.
Morgan’s soldierly context matters. Military culture prizes composure, mission focus, and the suppression of panic. Trauma gets managed through procedure and silence; emotions are liabilities until they’re not. “Draw blood” borrows the logic of combat and field medicine: you don’t heal what you refuse to expose, and you don’t know what’s real until there’s consequence. The metaphor also suggests discipline, not indulgence. Blood is not melodrama; it’s evidence.
Subtextually, he’s warning against two fashionable evasions: aesthetic distance (beautiful sentences that never risk anything) and moral self-protection (writing that edits out one’s own complicity). The “painful scene” isn’t necessarily violence; it can be the moment you look cowardice, desire, prejudice, or love-with-conditions in the eye.
Still, the line carries a quiet ethical demand. Drawing blood is acceptable only if the wound is yours first. Otherwise the bravado slips into exploitation: mining other people’s suffering for literary adrenaline. Morgan’s challenge is to risk yourself on the page, not to weaponize pain as content.
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