"I want a kiss to be so believable it give the reader shivers"
About this Quote
The shiver is doing double duty. It’s not just arousal; it’s a small jolt of danger, vulnerability, recognition. A believable kiss implies consequences: someone is risking something (status, safety, self-control), and the reader can feel that risk as sensation. That’s why the phrase works: it reframes “chemistry” as craft, not magic. You don’t get shivers by piling on adjectives; you get them by building pressure, by earning intimacy through specificity - the awkward pause, the misread signal, the hunger that’s also fear.
Context matters: Hamilton writes in a tradition where the supernatural often externalizes desire. Monsters, power dynamics, and taboo are metaphors with teeth. Her intent is to make the erotic credible inside heightened worlds, grounding fantasy in the one thing readers can’t easily dismiss: their own nervous system.
Quote Details
| Topic | Romantic |
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APA Style (7th ed.)
Hamilton, Laurell K. (2026, January 16). I want a kiss to be so believable it give the reader shivers. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/i-want-a-kiss-to-be-so-believable-it-give-the-92892/
Chicago Style
Hamilton, Laurell K. "I want a kiss to be so believable it give the reader shivers." FixQuotes. January 16, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/i-want-a-kiss-to-be-so-believable-it-give-the-92892/.
MLA Style (9th ed.)
"I want a kiss to be so believable it give the reader shivers." FixQuotes, 16 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/i-want-a-kiss-to-be-so-believable-it-give-the-92892/. Accessed 12 Feb. 2026.






