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Love & Passion Quote by Laurell K. Hamilton

"I want a kiss to be so believable it give the reader shivers"

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Hamilton isn’t asking for romance; she’s asking for evidence. The kiss she wants on the page has to pass as physically true, the kind of moment that makes a reader’s body react before their brain can critique the prose. “Believable” is the tell: in genre fiction, especially the paranormal and erotic-inflected worlds Hamilton is known for, desire can slide into choreography or wish-fulfillment. She’s drawing a hard line against that. A kiss isn’t a decorative beat between plot points; it’s a stress test for character, consent, and stakes.

The shiver is doing double duty. It’s not just arousal; it’s a small jolt of danger, vulnerability, recognition. A believable kiss implies consequences: someone is risking something (status, safety, self-control), and the reader can feel that risk as sensation. That’s why the phrase works: it reframes “chemistry” as craft, not magic. You don’t get shivers by piling on adjectives; you get them by building pressure, by earning intimacy through specificity - the awkward pause, the misread signal, the hunger that’s also fear.

Context matters: Hamilton writes in a tradition where the supernatural often externalizes desire. Monsters, power dynamics, and taboo are metaphors with teeth. Her intent is to make the erotic credible inside heightened worlds, grounding fantasy in the one thing readers can’t easily dismiss: their own nervous system.

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Hamilton, Laurell K. (2026, January 16). I want a kiss to be so believable it give the reader shivers. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/i-want-a-kiss-to-be-so-believable-it-give-the-92892/

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Hamilton, Laurell K. "I want a kiss to be so believable it give the reader shivers." FixQuotes. January 16, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/i-want-a-kiss-to-be-so-believable-it-give-the-92892/.

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"I want a kiss to be so believable it give the reader shivers." FixQuotes, 16 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/i-want-a-kiss-to-be-so-believable-it-give-the-92892/. Accessed 12 Feb. 2026.

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Laurell K. Hamilton (born February 19, 1963) is a Writer from USA.

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