"If at first you do succeed - try to hide your astonishment"
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Victory isn’t framed here as destiny or virtue; it’s treated as a statistical fluke you’d be wise not to celebrate too loudly. “If at first you do succeed” flips the cheery bootstraps proverb into a deadpan warning: success, especially on the first try, isn’t proof of talent so much as evidence that reality briefly misplaced its usual cruelty. The punchline - “try to hide your astonishment” - turns triumph into something faintly embarrassing, like laughing too hard at your own joke. It’s humor as self-defense, a way to stay socially acceptable in the moment your luck outpaces your reputation.
Coming from Harry Banks, a young soldier who lived a short life in the shadow of the First World War era, the line reads as trench-wise skepticism distilled into a single grin. Soldiers learn quickly that outcomes aren’t neatly earned. Survival and success can be arbitrary: weather, timing, a misfired shell, an officer’s whim. The joke smuggles in that worldview without ever saying “the world is random” out loud. It lets you acknowledge the chaos while keeping your posture straight.
The subtext is also classically British in its restraint: don’t make a spectacle of yourself, even when you win. Modesty isn’t just a virtue; it’s camouflage. Celebrate too openly and you tempt the universe, invite envy, or mark yourself as naive. The wit works because it refuses the inspirational poster version of perseverance and replaces it with something more honest: competence matters, but luck always has the last word.
Coming from Harry Banks, a young soldier who lived a short life in the shadow of the First World War era, the line reads as trench-wise skepticism distilled into a single grin. Soldiers learn quickly that outcomes aren’t neatly earned. Survival and success can be arbitrary: weather, timing, a misfired shell, an officer’s whim. The joke smuggles in that worldview without ever saying “the world is random” out loud. It lets you acknowledge the chaos while keeping your posture straight.
The subtext is also classically British in its restraint: don’t make a spectacle of yourself, even when you win. Modesty isn’t just a virtue; it’s camouflage. Celebrate too openly and you tempt the universe, invite envy, or mark yourself as naive. The wit works because it refuses the inspirational poster version of perseverance and replaces it with something more honest: competence matters, but luck always has the last word.
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