"If at first you do succeed - try to hide your astonishment"
About this Quote
Coming from Harry Banks, a young soldier who lived a short life in the shadow of the First World War era, the line reads as trench-wise skepticism distilled into a single grin. Soldiers learn quickly that outcomes aren’t neatly earned. Survival and success can be arbitrary: weather, timing, a misfired shell, an officer’s whim. The joke smuggles in that worldview without ever saying “the world is random” out loud. It lets you acknowledge the chaos while keeping your posture straight.
The subtext is also classically British in its restraint: don’t make a spectacle of yourself, even when you win. Modesty isn’t just a virtue; it’s camouflage. Celebrate too openly and you tempt the universe, invite envy, or mark yourself as naive. The wit works because it refuses the inspirational poster version of perseverance and replaces it with something more honest: competence matters, but luck always has the last word.
Quote Details
| Topic | Witty One-Liners |
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| Source | Later attribution: Funniest Thing You Never Said 2 (Rosemarie Jarski, 2010) modern compilationISBN: 9781407079028 · ID: 07SShhi-hHcC
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... If at first you do succeed try to hide your astonishment . Harry F. Banks Success makes life easier . It doesn't make living easier . Bruce Springsteen On every summit you are on the brink of an abyss . Stanislaw J. Lec One evening when ... |
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APA Style (7th ed.)
Banks, Harry. (2026, February 9). If at first you do succeed - try to hide your astonishment. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/if-at-first-you-do-succeed-try-to-hide-your-17327/
Chicago Style
Banks, Harry. "If at first you do succeed - try to hide your astonishment." FixQuotes. February 9, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/if-at-first-you-do-succeed-try-to-hide-your-17327/.
MLA Style (9th ed.)
"If at first you do succeed - try to hide your astonishment." FixQuotes, 9 Feb. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/if-at-first-you-do-succeed-try-to-hide-your-17327/. Accessed 12 Feb. 2026.









