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Success Quote by Dorothy Fields

"If you don't have a story that will hold the audience, you won't have a successful show"

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Show business loves to pretend it runs on charisma, spectacle, or star power. Dorothy Fields flatly disagrees, and she’s speaking as someone who helped build the American musical when it was learning how to seduce mass audiences night after night. “If you don’t have a story that will hold the audience, you won’t have a successful show” isn’t precious advice about plot structure; it’s a hard-nosed reminder that attention is the real box-office currency.

Fields, a lyricist who worked across Broadway and Hollywood, understood that songs and jokes are only as potent as the engine underneath them. Her wording is bluntly conditional: no story, no success. Not “a better show,” not “critical respect.” Success. The intent is practical, almost managerial: you can’t outsource emotional investment to choreography, production value, or even great tunes. The subtext is sharper: audiences aren’t obligated to be moved. They’re restless, skeptical, and fully capable of turning their affection into silence.

Context matters here. Fields came up in an era when musical theater was evolving from revue-style variety into narrative-driven musicals with character arcs and stakes. Her line reads like a craft credo shaped by rehearsal rooms and preview audiences, where laughter and applause are data. “Hold the audience” implies something physical: attention slips, bodies shift, people check out. A story isn’t just backstory; it’s the tension that keeps a room listening.

Fields also quietly levels the hierarchy. Lyrics, performers, even melody are not the core; they’re delivery systems for meaning. She’s defending narrative as the gravitational force that makes all the glitter land.

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Fields, Dorothy. (2026, January 17). If you don't have a story that will hold the audience, you won't have a successful show. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/if-you-dont-have-a-story-that-will-hold-the-60805/

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Fields, Dorothy. "If you don't have a story that will hold the audience, you won't have a successful show." FixQuotes. January 17, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/if-you-dont-have-a-story-that-will-hold-the-60805/.

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"If you don't have a story that will hold the audience, you won't have a successful show." FixQuotes, 17 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/if-you-dont-have-a-story-that-will-hold-the-60805/. Accessed 12 Feb. 2026.

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Dorothy Fields

Dorothy Fields (July 15, 1905 - March 28, 1974) was a Musician from USA.

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