"If you will tell me why the fen appears impassable, I then will tell you why I think that I can cross it if I try"
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The bargain she offers is slyly asymmetrical. You explain the obstacle; she explains her attempt. That reversal implies a quiet mistrust of conventional expertise: the person declaring the fen uncrossable may be repeating inherited warnings, mistaking tradition for topography. Moore’s speaker insists on specificity. Is the problem depth, suction, reeds, weather, visibility, or simply fear with good PR?
In a modern key, it reads like a critique of gatekeeping that masquerades as realism. Institutions and cynics love to label certain paths “not for you,” especially when the costs of discouragement are borne by someone else. Moore doesn’t deny the fen; she refuses the finality of other people’s verdicts. The conditional “if I try” matters because it’s modest: not destiny, not bravado, just the moral claim of effort as a form of knowledge.
Contextually, Moore’s poetry often praises precision, observation, and disciplined independence. This line fits her broader stance: reality is complex, but so is agency. The subtext is a demand for better reasons - and, failing that, permission to test the boundary for herself.
Quote Details
| Topic | Overcoming Obstacles |
|---|---|
| Source | Verified source: O to Be a Dragon (Marianne Moore, 1959)
Evidence: If you will tell me why the fen Appears impassable, I then Will tell you why I think that I Can get across it, if I try.. This line is not a standalone aphorism in Moore; it is the complete 4-line poem titled “I May, I Might, I Must” (also known under the variant title “Progress”). The primary-source publication I could verify online is Moore’s poetry collection O to Be a Dragon (New York: The Viking Press, 1959), which contains the poem. I was not able to verify, using freely accessible primary scans, the earliest (first) publication of the poem, though secondary/archival descriptions indicate an early version titled “Progress” dates to Moore’s Bryn Mawr years and was printed in the student publication Tipyn O’Bob in 1909; confirming that as the *first* appearance would require checking that 1909 issue directly (a library scan or the physical magazine). Other candidates (1) Full Swing (Ira Berkow, 2007) compilation96.3% ... If you will tell me why the fen / appears impassable , I then / will tell you why I think that I / can cross it i... |
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Moore, Marianne. (2026, February 15). If you will tell me why the fen appears impassable, I then will tell you why I think that I can cross it if I try. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/if-you-will-tell-me-why-the-fen-appears-54629/
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Moore, Marianne. "If you will tell me why the fen appears impassable, I then will tell you why I think that I can cross it if I try." FixQuotes. February 15, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/if-you-will-tell-me-why-the-fen-appears-54629/.
MLA Style (9th ed.)
"If you will tell me why the fen appears impassable, I then will tell you why I think that I can cross it if I try." FixQuotes, 15 Feb. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/if-you-will-tell-me-why-the-fen-appears-54629/. Accessed 19 Feb. 2026.








