"If you will tell me why the fen appears impassable, I then will tell you why I think that I can cross it if I try"
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Marianne Moore turns a patch of marsh into a cross-examination. “If you will tell me why the fen appears impassable” is less request than challenge: name the grounds of your certainty. Moore’s wit is procedural, almost legalistic, and that’s the point. She isn’t romanticizing grit; she’s interrogating the rhetoric of impossibility. The word “appears” does heavy lifting, downgrading “impassable” from fact to perception, from terrain to story we tell ourselves.
The bargain she offers is slyly asymmetrical. You explain the obstacle; she explains her attempt. That reversal implies a quiet mistrust of conventional expertise: the person declaring the fen uncrossable may be repeating inherited warnings, mistaking tradition for topography. Moore’s speaker insists on specificity. Is the problem depth, suction, reeds, weather, visibility, or simply fear with good PR?
In a modern key, it reads like a critique of gatekeeping that masquerades as realism. Institutions and cynics love to label certain paths “not for you,” especially when the costs of discouragement are borne by someone else. Moore doesn’t deny the fen; she refuses the finality of other people’s verdicts. The conditional “if I try” matters because it’s modest: not destiny, not bravado, just the moral claim of effort as a form of knowledge.
Contextually, Moore’s poetry often praises precision, observation, and disciplined independence. This line fits her broader stance: reality is complex, but so is agency. The subtext is a demand for better reasons - and, failing that, permission to test the boundary for herself.
The bargain she offers is slyly asymmetrical. You explain the obstacle; she explains her attempt. That reversal implies a quiet mistrust of conventional expertise: the person declaring the fen uncrossable may be repeating inherited warnings, mistaking tradition for topography. Moore’s speaker insists on specificity. Is the problem depth, suction, reeds, weather, visibility, or simply fear with good PR?
In a modern key, it reads like a critique of gatekeeping that masquerades as realism. Institutions and cynics love to label certain paths “not for you,” especially when the costs of discouragement are borne by someone else. Moore doesn’t deny the fen; she refuses the finality of other people’s verdicts. The conditional “if I try” matters because it’s modest: not destiny, not bravado, just the moral claim of effort as a form of knowledge.
Contextually, Moore’s poetry often praises precision, observation, and disciplined independence. This line fits her broader stance: reality is complex, but so is agency. The subtext is a demand for better reasons - and, failing that, permission to test the boundary for herself.
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| Topic | Overcoming Obstacles |
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| Source | Help us find the source |
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