"I'm most suspicious of scripts that have a lot of stage direction at the top of the page... sunrise over the desert and masses of... a whole essay before you get to the dialogue"
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The subtext is craft-politics. Stage direction is power: it tells everyone where to look, what to feel, how long to feel it. Hopkins, who’s made a career out of micro-adjustments in voice and timing, is suspicious of that kind of pre-chewed emotion. A block of scenic prose can become a form of overcontrol, flattening the space where actors do their best work: in uncertainty, contradiction, and subtext.
There’s also an industrial context baked into his gripe. Film and TV are collaborative machines with brutal time constraints. An “essay before you get to the dialogue” doesn’t just slow the read; it telegraphs budget, ego, and a misunderstanding of the medium. Writers who over-direct on the page can be trying to protect their vision from being diluted, but the effect is often the opposite: it reads like compensation.
Hopkins isn’t anti-visual. He’s anti-writing that hides behind visuals. If the story needs a desert sunrise to feel important, maybe the scene hasn’t earned its own weight yet.
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"I'm most suspicious of scripts that have a lot of stage direction at the top of the page... sunrise over the desert and masses of... a whole essay before you get to the dialogue." FixQuotes, 17 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/im-most-suspicious-of-scripts-that-have-a-lot-of-39948/. Accessed 24 Feb. 2026.



