"In a novel, it's hard to keep track of everybody"
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Shaw, who wrote with a reportorial eye for group dynamics (war units, workplaces, marriages under pressure), is hinting that character isn’t just invention; it’s management. “Everybody” is doing double duty: it means the literal sprawl of names and motives, and the moral pressure of trying to be fair to multiple human claims. Keeping track isn’t only remembering who has what job or scar. It’s tracking consequences, emotional continuity, the way yesterday’s conversation should distort today’s decision. The subtext is that a novel fails less from bad sentences than from dropped threads.
There’s also a sly demystification here. Romantic myths treat novelists as godlike creators; Shaw frames the job as closer to running a crowded dinner party where everyone has a grievance and the waiter keeps changing shifts. It’s funny because it’s true, and it’s true because the modern novel is basically an argument against simplification. If you want “everybody” in the room, you inherit their chaos.
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Shaw, Irwin. (2026, January 16). In a novel, it's hard to keep track of everybody. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/in-a-novel-its-hard-to-keep-track-of-everybody-92005/
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"In a novel, it's hard to keep track of everybody." FixQuotes, 16 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/in-a-novel-its-hard-to-keep-track-of-everybody-92005/. Accessed 12 Feb. 2026.





