"In a poem the excitement has to maintain itself. I am governed by the pull of the sentence as the pull of a fabric is governed by gravity"
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Moore treats a poem less like a vessel for grand feeling than a physical object you can tug, test, and ruin with one bad seam. “Excitement” here isn’t the poet’s giddiness; it’s the reader’s ongoing alertness, the charged attention that has to be earned line after line. The quiet severity of “has to” gives away her ethic: craft isn’t optional, it’s the condition of being taken seriously.
Then she pivots to the sentence, not the line. That’s a sly manifesto from a writer often miscast as merely precise or “quirky.” Moore is arguing that poetic intensity is syntactic before it’s lyrical. A poem maintains excitement by the way a sentence drags you forward: clauses tightening like fingers on a sleeve, pivots and interruptions creating torque, the final landing feeling inevitable rather than performed. She’s pushing back against the romantic myth of inspiration as a gust; her excitement is engineered.
The fabric metaphor is doing more work than it seems. Fabric is flexible, patterned, and made by labor; gravity is indifferent, constant, un-negotiable. Moore’s subtext is that language has its own physics. You can decorate it, you can cut it, but you can’t repeal its pull. In the modernist context she wrote in, this is also a rebuke to looseness disguised as freedom. The “pull of the sentence” is discipline masquerading as motion, the sensation that form itself is what keeps emotion from evaporating.
Then she pivots to the sentence, not the line. That’s a sly manifesto from a writer often miscast as merely precise or “quirky.” Moore is arguing that poetic intensity is syntactic before it’s lyrical. A poem maintains excitement by the way a sentence drags you forward: clauses tightening like fingers on a sleeve, pivots and interruptions creating torque, the final landing feeling inevitable rather than performed. She’s pushing back against the romantic myth of inspiration as a gust; her excitement is engineered.
The fabric metaphor is doing more work than it seems. Fabric is flexible, patterned, and made by labor; gravity is indifferent, constant, un-negotiable. Moore’s subtext is that language has its own physics. You can decorate it, you can cut it, but you can’t repeal its pull. In the modernist context she wrote in, this is also a rebuke to looseness disguised as freedom. The “pull of the sentence” is discipline masquerading as motion, the sensation that form itself is what keeps emotion from evaporating.
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