"In fact, in some ways, I actually feel much more confident about the quality of Carousel than I do about The Cottage Builder's Letter: probably because of its cohesive nature"
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Confidence is rarely about swagger; it is about structure. George Murray’s aside lands with the casual candor of a working poet doing triage on his own output: not which book is “better” in the abstract, but which one holds together under pressure. The telling move is his pivot away from taste and toward architecture. “Carousel” earns his faith “because of its cohesive nature,” a phrase that sounds clinical until you hear the anxiety underneath it: cohesion is what keeps a manuscript from dissolving into a highlight reel.
The comparison to The Cottage Builder’s Letter quietly admits a common poetic problem. A poet can write stunning individual pieces and still worry the collection reads like a folder, not a world. Murray frames confidence as an emergent property of sequencing, recurrence, and tonal continuity. He’s not claiming Carousel has higher peaks; he’s claiming it has fewer structural liabilities. That’s a craftsperson’s metric, not a brand-builder’s.
There’s also a subtle self-protective logic in “in some ways” and “actually.” Those hedges signal a mind aware of how risky it is to rank one’s own work, especially in a culture that treats books like products and poets like their own PR departments. Murray chooses the less sexy, more defensible argument: cohesion. It shifts the conversation from ego to intention, from applause lines to internal mechanics.
Context matters: poets often publish into small, attentive ecosystems where reputation is built on coherence of vision as much as on isolated brilliance. Murray’s confidence isn’t performative; it’s procedural. He trusts the book that behaves like a book.
The comparison to The Cottage Builder’s Letter quietly admits a common poetic problem. A poet can write stunning individual pieces and still worry the collection reads like a folder, not a world. Murray frames confidence as an emergent property of sequencing, recurrence, and tonal continuity. He’s not claiming Carousel has higher peaks; he’s claiming it has fewer structural liabilities. That’s a craftsperson’s metric, not a brand-builder’s.
There’s also a subtle self-protective logic in “in some ways” and “actually.” Those hedges signal a mind aware of how risky it is to rank one’s own work, especially in a culture that treats books like products and poets like their own PR departments. Murray chooses the less sexy, more defensible argument: cohesion. It shifts the conversation from ego to intention, from applause lines to internal mechanics.
Context matters: poets often publish into small, attentive ecosystems where reputation is built on coherence of vision as much as on isolated brilliance. Murray’s confidence isn’t performative; it’s procedural. He trusts the book that behaves like a book.
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