"It's important, I think, for a writer of fiction to maintain an awareness of the pace and shape of the book as he's writing it. That is, he should be making an object, not chattering"
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The jab lands in the last clause: “not chattering.” Perry isn’t attacking talkative prose so much as undisciplined intention. “Chattering” is language as nervous tic, scene piled on scene because the writer enjoys the sound of their own momentum. It’s also a warning about audience. Chatter is private speech; an “object” is made to be handled by someone else. That’s the moral pressure in the quote: respect the reader’s time by designing experience, not simply recording it.
Context matters in the way he frames this as “important, I think” and “he should,” a deliberately modest authority that still draws a bright line. It’s a musician’s pragmatism smuggled into literary advice: you can improvise, sure, but you’re still responsible for the arc. If the book doesn’t have a shape, it doesn’t have a point of view - it just has noise.
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Perry, Thomas. (2026, January 16). It's important, I think, for a writer of fiction to maintain an awareness of the pace and shape of the book as he's writing it. That is, he should be making an object, not chattering. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/its-important-i-think-for-a-writer-of-fiction-to-123724/
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Perry, Thomas. "It's important, I think, for a writer of fiction to maintain an awareness of the pace and shape of the book as he's writing it. That is, he should be making an object, not chattering." FixQuotes. January 16, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/its-important-i-think-for-a-writer-of-fiction-to-123724/.
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"It's important, I think, for a writer of fiction to maintain an awareness of the pace and shape of the book as he's writing it. That is, he should be making an object, not chattering." FixQuotes, 16 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/its-important-i-think-for-a-writer-of-fiction-to-123724/. Accessed 17 Feb. 2026.





