"Its language is as bare as a monk's cell, and as uninviting"
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The metaphor is carefully chosen. A monk’s cell isn’t just empty; it’s empty on purpose. That implicates the writer or institution behind the language: this isn’t accidental clunkiness, it’s self-denial as style. Longley hints at a kind of rhetorical piety - language scrubbed free of warmth, imagination, or risk, as if clarity were a temptation and charm a sin. It’s not merely boring; it’s suspiciously joyless.
As a journalist, Longley is also defending the reader. “Uninviting” is a consumer-facing word, less about aesthetics than access. He’s pointing to a democratic problem: when public language becomes punishingly spare, it stops being a bridge and starts being a barricade. The sentence works because it captures how institutions often launder power through blandness, treating readability as optional and human connection as a liability.
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APA Style (7th ed.)
Longley, Clifford. (2026, January 15). Its language is as bare as a monk's cell, and as uninviting. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/its-language-is-as-bare-as-a-monks-cell-and-as-53588/
Chicago Style
Longley, Clifford. "Its language is as bare as a monk's cell, and as uninviting." FixQuotes. January 15, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/its-language-is-as-bare-as-a-monks-cell-and-as-53588/.
MLA Style (9th ed.)
"Its language is as bare as a monk's cell, and as uninviting." FixQuotes, 15 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/its-language-is-as-bare-as-a-monks-cell-and-as-53588/. Accessed 13 Feb. 2026.









