"Less really is more. It's a tendency of beginning writers to want to prove what they're talking about by going too far with description. I think you've got to keep it short, crisp and clean"
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The quote’s sting is aimed at “beginning writers,” and the subtext is affectionate but blunt: overwriting is often insecurity with adjectives. Newer writers “prove” they know their world by piling on sensory detail, backstory, and explanatory connective tissue, as if the reader is a skeptical jury. Thor flips that impulse. The job isn’t to demonstrate that you can see everything; it’s to choose what matters so precisely that the reader feels everything. Restraint becomes a credibility play.
“Short, crisp and clean” carries the cadence of a mission briefing, not a workshop sermon. It’s also a quiet reminder that description is not automatically depth. Too much can flatten a scene by making every element equally important, which is another way of saying nothing is. By advocating compression, Thor is really advocating hierarchy: select the detail that does narrative work and let the rest vanish.
Context matters: this is advice from a novelist whose brand depends on pace, legibility, and controlled revelation. The line reads like a promise to his audience, too: trust me, I won’t waste your time.
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APA Style (7th ed.)
Thor, Brad. (2026, January 15). Less really is more. It's a tendency of beginning writers to want to prove what they're talking about by going too far with description. I think you've got to keep it short, crisp and clean. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/less-really-is-more-its-a-tendency-of-beginning-167083/
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Thor, Brad. "Less really is more. It's a tendency of beginning writers to want to prove what they're talking about by going too far with description. I think you've got to keep it short, crisp and clean." FixQuotes. January 15, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/less-really-is-more-its-a-tendency-of-beginning-167083/.
MLA Style (9th ed.)
"Less really is more. It's a tendency of beginning writers to want to prove what they're talking about by going too far with description. I think you've got to keep it short, crisp and clean." FixQuotes, 15 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/less-really-is-more-its-a-tendency-of-beginning-167083/. Accessed 21 Feb. 2026.





