"No thesaurus can give you those words, no rhyming dictionary. They must happen out of you"
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It is a quiet demolition of the fantasy that craft tools can substitute for voice. Dorothy Fields, who built a career writing lyrics that had to land in someone else’s mouth on a deadline, isn’t scorning technique; she’s putting it in its place. A thesaurus and a rhyming dictionary can supply options, but they can’t supply necessity. The best line in a song doesn’t feel “selected,” it feels inevitable, like it could only come from that narrator, that rhythm, that bruise.
Fields’ phrasing is key: “give you” makes those books sound like vending machines, offering language as product. Then she pivots to “happen,” a verb that suggests accident, bodily impulse, weather. Words aren’t mined; they break the surface. “Out of you” is almost anatomical, which is fitting for a songwriter whose job was to turn inner life into something singable and public. She’s pointing at the moment when lyric stops being clever and starts being true.
The subtext is also a warning against prettiness-for-its-own-sake. Rhymes are especially guilty: they tempt writers into saying what fits instead of what’s felt. Fields came up in Tin Pan Alley and Broadway, industries famous for polish, formulas, and collaboration. Her line reads like insider advice from someone who mastered the machinery and still knew its limits: use the tools, sure, but don’t let them steer. If the words don’t “happen,” the audience hears the effort. If they do, it sounds like a confession set to music.
Fields’ phrasing is key: “give you” makes those books sound like vending machines, offering language as product. Then she pivots to “happen,” a verb that suggests accident, bodily impulse, weather. Words aren’t mined; they break the surface. “Out of you” is almost anatomical, which is fitting for a songwriter whose job was to turn inner life into something singable and public. She’s pointing at the moment when lyric stops being clever and starts being true.
The subtext is also a warning against prettiness-for-its-own-sake. Rhymes are especially guilty: they tempt writers into saying what fits instead of what’s felt. Fields came up in Tin Pan Alley and Broadway, industries famous for polish, formulas, and collaboration. Her line reads like insider advice from someone who mastered the machinery and still knew its limits: use the tools, sure, but don’t let them steer. If the words don’t “happen,” the audience hears the effort. If they do, it sounds like a confession set to music.
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