"Once I've discovered the story, I might restructure it, maybe move things around, set up a clue that something is going to happen later, but that happens much later in an editorial capacity"
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The key phrase is “much later,” which is both practical advice and an aesthetic stance. Ondaatje’s work often feels like it’s moving by intuition - lyric, fragmentary, attentive to memory’s gaps - but here he points out how deliberately that sensation can be built. “Set up a clue” is a tell: he’s acknowledging reader psychology. We want to believe we’re uncovering a world, not being led by the lapel. So he delays the visible machinery until the story has its own internal weather, then retrofits the foreshadowing that makes the final version feel fated rather than patched.
Subtextually, he’s defending revision as an ethical act: not falsifying the discovery, but honoring it by arranging it so the reader can experience that same discovery at speed. In an era that fetishizes rawness - the unfiltered draft, the “authentic” first take - Ondaatje stakes a calmer claim: authenticity isn’t the absence of editing; it’s the editor’s restraint, arriving after the story has already told you what it wants.
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APA Style (7th ed.)
Ondaatje, Michael. (2026, January 16). Once I've discovered the story, I might restructure it, maybe move things around, set up a clue that something is going to happen later, but that happens much later in an editorial capacity. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/once-ive-discovered-the-story-i-might-restructure-93853/
Chicago Style
Ondaatje, Michael. "Once I've discovered the story, I might restructure it, maybe move things around, set up a clue that something is going to happen later, but that happens much later in an editorial capacity." FixQuotes. January 16, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/once-ive-discovered-the-story-i-might-restructure-93853/.
MLA Style (9th ed.)
"Once I've discovered the story, I might restructure it, maybe move things around, set up a clue that something is going to happen later, but that happens much later in an editorial capacity." FixQuotes, 16 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/once-ive-discovered-the-story-i-might-restructure-93853/. Accessed 12 Feb. 2026.



