"She would be half a planet away, floating in a turquoise sea, dancing by moonlight to flamenco guitar"
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Distance becomes a kind of narcotic here, the way Fitch renders absence as an indulgent postcard you can’t quite trust. “Half a planet away” is a blunt measurement that immediately flips into intoxication: a “turquoise sea,” “moonlight,” “flamenco guitar.” The line performs a familiar psychological trick - when someone is unreachable, the mind doesn’t just miss them; it auditions versions of them, casts them in an exotic, cinematic role. Fitch’s intent isn’t simply to paint beauty. It’s to show how yearning beautifies, how separation turns a real woman into a shimmering idea with excellent lighting.
The verb choices do a lot of covert work. “Floating” suggests ease, weightlessness, a life unburdened by the speaker’s gravity. “Dancing” isn’t joy so much as motion you can’t interrupt. And flamenco, specifically, carries coded heat: passion disciplined into form, romance with sharp edges. It’s not neutral “music” - it’s a genre that lets the imagination project sensuality and danger without having to name either.
Subtextually, the sentence betrays the speaker’s powerlessness. The woman is not merely elsewhere; she is elsewhere in a way that feels curated to exclude him, as if the world is staging a scene she belongs to and he can only narrate. Contextually (and very much in Fitch’s wheelhouse), it’s the glossy surface of desire rubbing against the ache underneath: the fantasy of her freedom doubles as a confession of his own confinement.
The verb choices do a lot of covert work. “Floating” suggests ease, weightlessness, a life unburdened by the speaker’s gravity. “Dancing” isn’t joy so much as motion you can’t interrupt. And flamenco, specifically, carries coded heat: passion disciplined into form, romance with sharp edges. It’s not neutral “music” - it’s a genre that lets the imagination project sensuality and danger without having to name either.
Subtextually, the sentence betrays the speaker’s powerlessness. The woman is not merely elsewhere; she is elsewhere in a way that feels curated to exclude him, as if the world is staging a scene she belongs to and he can only narrate. Contextually (and very much in Fitch’s wheelhouse), it’s the glossy surface of desire rubbing against the ache underneath: the fantasy of her freedom doubles as a confession of his own confinement.
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| Topic | Long-Distance Relationship |
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