"The second draft is on yellow paper, that's when I work on characterizations. The third is pink, I work on story motivations. Then blue, that's where I cut, cut, cut"
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The sequence matters. Yellow is for characterizations, placing people before plot mechanics; she’s telling you that even her big, brassy novels start with human legibility. Pink is for motivations, a subtler admission: melodrama only works when desire is internally coherent. Readers will follow outrageous turns if they believe the characters would actually make those choices. Then comes blue: “cut, cut, cut” is both craft credo and brand protection. Excess is the enemy of pace, and pace is Susann’s core promise to her audience.
In context, Susann wrote in a mid-century literary culture that often treated bestsellerdom as vulgarity and women’s commercial success as suspect. The meticulous system reads as a defense and a flex: she’s not merely confessing process; she’s asserting professionalism. There’s also a backstage glimpse of how mass-market storytelling is built to travel fast, hit hard, and leave no slack. The subtext is almost defiant: you can sneer at the gloss, but the gloss is work.
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Susann, Jacqueline. (2026, January 16). The second draft is on yellow paper, that's when I work on characterizations. The third is pink, I work on story motivations. Then blue, that's where I cut, cut, cut. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/the-second-draft-is-on-yellow-paper-thats-when-i-133057/
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Susann, Jacqueline. "The second draft is on yellow paper, that's when I work on characterizations. The third is pink, I work on story motivations. Then blue, that's where I cut, cut, cut." FixQuotes. January 16, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/the-second-draft-is-on-yellow-paper-thats-when-i-133057/.
MLA Style (9th ed.)
"The second draft is on yellow paper, that's when I work on characterizations. The third is pink, I work on story motivations. Then blue, that's where I cut, cut, cut." FixQuotes, 16 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/the-second-draft-is-on-yellow-paper-thats-when-i-133057/. Accessed 12 Feb. 2026.




