"The writer's shortness of breath became more and more distressing as he rose"
About this Quote
The specific intent is to turn ascent into pressure: physical elevation becomes psychological escalation. "As he rose" is doing double work. On the surface it's simple movement, but it also hints at a more loaded kind of rising: ambition, self-importance, the effort of producing words that reach for something higher. Stuck, an explorer who knew altitude and exhaustion firsthand, understands how quickly aspiration can flip into vulnerability. Put a writer in that environment and you get an unglamorous truth: the mind's work is still trapped inside a fragile organism.
Subtextually, this is a quiet rebuke to romantic notions of authorship and adventure. The "writer" is not conquering anything; he's being conquered by his own breathing. That inversion feels modern: the heroism is not in triumph but in the stubborn continuation of motion while discomfort mounts.
Context matters because Stuck wrote from the world of extreme landscapes (he famously climbed Denali). His prose often treats nature as an indifferent force. Here, nature doesn't roar; it simply reduces a person to lungs and fear, and that restraint is exactly why it lands.
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APA Style (7th ed.)
Stuck, Hudson. (2026, January 17). The writer's shortness of breath became more and more distressing as he rose. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/the-writers-shortness-of-breath-became-more-and-68209/
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Stuck, Hudson. "The writer's shortness of breath became more and more distressing as he rose." FixQuotes. January 17, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/the-writers-shortness-of-breath-became-more-and-68209/.
MLA Style (9th ed.)
"The writer's shortness of breath became more and more distressing as he rose." FixQuotes, 17 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/the-writers-shortness-of-breath-became-more-and-68209/. Accessed 11 Feb. 2026.










