"There is something wrong about the man who wants help. There is somewhere a deep defect, a want, in brief, a need, a crying need, somewhere about that man"
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The repetition ("deep defect", "want", "need", "crying need") reads like a prosecutor stacking charges, or a doctor searching for the hidden lesion. It's overdetermined on purpose. By piling synonyms, he mimics the anxious logic of respectable society: if someone asks, there must be something fundamentally wrong with him. The language performs the paranoia it criticizes, dramatizing how compassion gets rerouted into pathology.
Context matters. Melville wrote in a 19th-century America that preached self-reliance while industrial life made self-reliance harder to attain. In that contradiction, asking for help becomes a social transgression: it threatens the myth that the system is fair and that virtue is sufficient. So the needy person must be made suspect to keep the myth intact.
The subtext is bleakly modern: the real "defect" is not in the petitioner but in the gaze that requires defect as an explanation. Melville is anatomizing a moral economy where independence is treated as proof of worth, and dependence, even temporary, becomes a stain.
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Melville, Herman. (2026, January 15). There is something wrong about the man who wants help. There is somewhere a deep defect, a want, in brief, a need, a crying need, somewhere about that man. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/there-is-something-wrong-about-the-man-who-wants-36470/
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Melville, Herman. "There is something wrong about the man who wants help. There is somewhere a deep defect, a want, in brief, a need, a crying need, somewhere about that man." FixQuotes. January 15, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/there-is-something-wrong-about-the-man-who-wants-36470/.
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"There is something wrong about the man who wants help. There is somewhere a deep defect, a want, in brief, a need, a crying need, somewhere about that man." FixQuotes, 15 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/there-is-something-wrong-about-the-man-who-wants-36470/. Accessed 10 Feb. 2026.












