"This time all the historical details and things were right. But I'd written it again in third person, and people found it dry. I decided to throw that one away"
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The culprit he names is craft, not content: third person. Not because third person is inherently lifeless, but because for Golden’s project (and the world he’s known for evoking), distance is deadly. A novel built out of texture - etiquette, gendered power, private shame, the small negotiations that make an era feel oppressive or intoxicating - needs a camera placed inside the room, not across the street. “Dry” is the reader’s verdict, but it’s also a moral one: the prose didn’t earn intimacy, so it couldn’t deliver urgency.
“I decided to throw that one away” is where the real intent sits. It’s less self-criticism than a declaration of priorities: storytelling over scholarship, voice over verification. There’s also a subtle humility here. Golden is acknowledging that the author’s job isn’t to be right; it’s to be convincing in the human sense. Getting the “historical details” right is table stakes. Making them matter is the art.
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Golden, Arthur. (n.d.). This time all the historical details and things were right. But I'd written it again in third person, and people found it dry. I decided to throw that one away. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/this-time-all-the-historical-details-and-things-169268/
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Golden, Arthur. "This time all the historical details and things were right. But I'd written it again in third person, and people found it dry. I decided to throw that one away." FixQuotes. Accessed February 3, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/this-time-all-the-historical-details-and-things-169268/.
MLA Style (9th ed.)
"This time all the historical details and things were right. But I'd written it again in third person, and people found it dry. I decided to throw that one away." FixQuotes, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/this-time-all-the-historical-details-and-things-169268/. Accessed 3 Feb. 2026.





