"When I was writing pretty poor poetry, this girl with midnight black hair told me to go on"
About this Quote
The girl with midnight black hair is rendered with a novelist's shorthand: one vivid detail, no name, no biography. She becomes less a character than a catalyst, the kind of remembered figure that youth turns into symbol. Midnight black hair suggests romance and intensity, but Sandburg keeps the sentiment tethered to a single action: encouragement. The line isn't about the muse who inspires great art; it's about the witness who refuses to let a young writer quit.
The subtext is classed and gendered in a way that fits Sandburg's era. A male poet credits a woman's emotional labor as the hinge point of his persistence, while still holding narrative control: she appears as a flash of darkness and permission, then vanishes. That tension is part of why it works. It's gratitude without grandiosity, an admission that ambition often needs an accomplice, and that art can start not with confidence, but with someone else's faith standing in for your own.
Quote Details
| Topic | Poetry |
|---|---|
| Source | Help us find the source |
| Cite |
Citation Formats
APA Style (7th ed.)
Sandburg, Carl. (2026, January 15). When I was writing pretty poor poetry, this girl with midnight black hair told me to go on. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/when-i-was-writing-pretty-poor-poetry-this-girl-150272/
Chicago Style
Sandburg, Carl. "When I was writing pretty poor poetry, this girl with midnight black hair told me to go on." FixQuotes. January 15, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/when-i-was-writing-pretty-poor-poetry-this-girl-150272/.
MLA Style (9th ed.)
"When I was writing pretty poor poetry, this girl with midnight black hair told me to go on." FixQuotes, 15 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/when-i-was-writing-pretty-poor-poetry-this-girl-150272/. Accessed 12 Feb. 2026.



