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Life & Wisdom Quote by Carl Sandburg

"When I was writing pretty poor poetry, this girl with midnight black hair told me to go on"

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A confession like this lands because it refuses the myth of the solitary genius. Sandburg, the bard of stockyards and prairie weather, frames his origin story not as a thunderclap of talent but as a moment of ordinary mercy: he was writing pretty poor poetry, and someone told him to continue anyway. The modesty is doing double duty. It humanizes him, yes, but it also quietly argues that craft is built in the unglamorous middle, when your work is bad and you keep going.

The girl with midnight black hair is rendered with a novelist's shorthand: one vivid detail, no name, no biography. She becomes less a character than a catalyst, the kind of remembered figure that youth turns into symbol. Midnight black hair suggests romance and intensity, but Sandburg keeps the sentiment tethered to a single action: encouragement. The line isn't about the muse who inspires great art; it's about the witness who refuses to let a young writer quit.

The subtext is classed and gendered in a way that fits Sandburg's era. A male poet credits a woman's emotional labor as the hinge point of his persistence, while still holding narrative control: she appears as a flash of darkness and permission, then vanishes. That tension is part of why it works. It's gratitude without grandiosity, an admission that ambition often needs an accomplice, and that art can start not with confidence, but with someone else's faith standing in for your own.

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Sandburg, Carl. (2026, January 15). When I was writing pretty poor poetry, this girl with midnight black hair told me to go on. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/when-i-was-writing-pretty-poor-poetry-this-girl-150272/

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Sandburg, Carl. "When I was writing pretty poor poetry, this girl with midnight black hair told me to go on." FixQuotes. January 15, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/when-i-was-writing-pretty-poor-poetry-this-girl-150272/.

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"When I was writing pretty poor poetry, this girl with midnight black hair told me to go on." FixQuotes, 15 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/when-i-was-writing-pretty-poor-poetry-this-girl-150272/. Accessed 12 Feb. 2026.

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Carl Sandburg

Carl Sandburg (January 6, 1878 - July 22, 1967) was a Poet from USA.

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