"When prose gets too stylized and out of control - and Stein is sometimes a good example - when you don't know what the hell is going on, then it's kind of boring"
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Name-checking Gertrude Stein sharpens the point. Stein is an easy target and a revealing one: a modernist icon whose radical repetition and syntactic loops were designed to remake perception, not to tell a story in the usual way. By saying she’s “sometimes” an example, Moody signals a novelist’s uneasy respect. He knows Stein’s breakthroughs matter; he’s also insisting that difficulty needs an engine. If the reader can’t track intention - emotional, narrative, intellectual - then style stops reading as risk and starts reading as evasiveness.
The subtext is a defense of legibility as an ethical stance, not a pandering one. “Boring” is the quiet threat in workshop culture and literary scenes: the worst accusation isn’t that a book is wrong, but that it can’t sustain attention. Moody is drawing a line between productive estrangement (where confusion eventually pays off) and mere opacity (where confusion is the point). The intent is corrective, almost craft-based: experiment all you want, but give the reader a reason to stay.
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Moody, Rick. (n.d.). When prose gets too stylized and out of control - and Stein is sometimes a good example - when you don't know what the hell is going on, then it's kind of boring. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/when-prose-gets-too-stylized-and-out-of-control--87491/
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Moody, Rick. "When prose gets too stylized and out of control - and Stein is sometimes a good example - when you don't know what the hell is going on, then it's kind of boring." FixQuotes. Accessed February 3, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/when-prose-gets-too-stylized-and-out-of-control--87491/.
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"When prose gets too stylized and out of control - and Stein is sometimes a good example - when you don't know what the hell is going on, then it's kind of boring." FixQuotes, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/when-prose-gets-too-stylized-and-out-of-control--87491/. Accessed 3 Feb. 2026.


