"Don't forget that the only two things people read in a story are the first and last sentences. Give them blood in the eye on the first one"
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“Give them blood in the eye” is wonderfully blunt, even a little brutal. He’s not politely asking writers to “set the scene.” He’s telling them to create an immediate, visceral stake: danger, conflict, surprise, an image that bites. Blood isn’t just gore; it’s urgency. It’s the sense that something is happening now, to someone, with consequences. The phrase also reveals the editor’s subtext: writing isn’t self-expression, it’s persuasion under deadline.
Context matters. Swope came out of an era when newspapers fought for readers on crowded stands and in loud cities. The attention economy didn’t begin with phones; it began with competition. His advice still fits our feed-driven present, but it carries a warning: hooks can become gimmicks. The craft is making that first-sentence “blood” honest, not cheap, and making the last line land like a verdict.
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APA Style (7th ed.)
Swope, Herbert Bayard. (2026, January 17). Don't forget that the only two things people read in a story are the first and last sentences. Give them blood in the eye on the first one. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/dont-forget-that-the-only-two-things-people-read-63803/
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Swope, Herbert Bayard. "Don't forget that the only two things people read in a story are the first and last sentences. Give them blood in the eye on the first one." FixQuotes. January 17, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/dont-forget-that-the-only-two-things-people-read-63803/.
MLA Style (9th ed.)
"Don't forget that the only two things people read in a story are the first and last sentences. Give them blood in the eye on the first one." FixQuotes, 17 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/dont-forget-that-the-only-two-things-people-read-63803/. Accessed 11 Feb. 2026.


