"If a writer knows enough about what he is writing about, he may omit things that he knows. The dignity of movement of an iceberg is due to only one ninth of it being above water"
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The subtext is both aesthetic and moral. To spell everything out is to confess you don’t trust your material, your reader, or yourself. To omit is to project competence, even stoicism: experience doesn’t announce itself, it leaks through gesture and detail. That’s why he pairs “dignity” with “movement.” Dignity here is not politeness; it’s control under strain. The iceberg doesn’t thrash. It glides, because most of what makes it move is invisible.
Context matters: this is the newsroom-trained novelist who lived through World War I, reported on conflict, and wrote in the shadow of modernism’s distrust of grand speeches. After industrialized slaughter and political propaganda, verbosity could feel like fraud. Hemingway’s “iceberg theory” is a response: strip away the rhetoric, keep the hard facts, and let trauma register indirectly - in what characters won’t say, in the blank spaces where meaning pools.
There’s a quiet provocation, too. The method flatters the writer’s expertise, but it also dares the reader: if you don’t feel the other eight-ninths, maybe you weren’t paying attention.
Quote Details
| Topic | Writing |
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| Source | Death in the Afternoon (1932), Ernest Hemingway — contains the 'iceberg' theory passage often quoted as: 'If a writer knows enough... The dignity of movement of an iceberg is due to only one ninth of it being above water.' |
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APA Style (7th ed.)
Hemingway, Ernest. (2026, January 15). If a writer knows enough about what he is writing about, he may omit things that he knows. The dignity of movement of an iceberg is due to only one ninth of it being above water. FixQuotes. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/if-a-writer-knows-enough-about-what-he-is-writing-35184/
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Hemingway, Ernest. "If a writer knows enough about what he is writing about, he may omit things that he knows. The dignity of movement of an iceberg is due to only one ninth of it being above water." FixQuotes. January 15, 2026. https://fixquotes.com/quotes/if-a-writer-knows-enough-about-what-he-is-writing-35184/.
MLA Style (9th ed.)
"If a writer knows enough about what he is writing about, he may omit things that he knows. The dignity of movement of an iceberg is due to only one ninth of it being above water." FixQuotes, 15 Jan. 2026, https://fixquotes.com/quotes/if-a-writer-knows-enough-about-what-he-is-writing-35184/. Accessed 6 Feb. 2026.





